In and of itself, the story was alright. But the dialogue was a nightmare to read. I felt like my brain had developed a stutter as every character seemed to repeat at least one word per every sentence. I also had to re-read pages over and over, trying out different combinations of speech bubble patterns until the pages made sense. And then there were those odd discussions where the main detective's partner of all-of-two-hours demanded the guy's life story. She definitely didn't charm her way into my heart.